Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Is hard work now the key to success, or is talent also important? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people argued that talent is the most important part to achieve
success
while some people think that hard work
is the most important part. to achieve an aim. I personally believe that without hard work
one
cannot achieve his goals.
To begin
with, it is commonly said that hard work
is the key to success
. A person with talent and hard work
can achieve his aim easily. For instance
, a comedian Kapil Sharma found his capacity at a young age and went to Mumbai to get success
. Firstly
, he gave auditions and with his hard work
, he got selected and then
he got the title of India's laughter challenge number one
. Now he is the number one
comedian in India. He achieves everything with his hard work
.
On the other hand
, with ,hard work
one
can achieve his goal. People who are hardworking do hard work
day and night and can achieve what they want to achieve. For instance
, Einstein scientist observed his skill and then
he works hard for more than 10 years to achieve his target. Finally
, he gets huge success
with hardworking.
To conclude in my opinion, I think that with success
a person can achieve his target. If he has talent that's a good thing but hard work
is the key to success
.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite