By punishing murderer with the death penally, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderere. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Society has the responsibility that provides security for its citizens. One of these actions is preventing criminals or killers and considering the penalty to be limited . Some people think that killing them is not a good reaction and that being in prison is a good idea. While others believe, death is a better solution until they do not have any chance to do crime a gaine. I believe because judging might not be fair in all cases or for some other reasons prison is the best penalty for murders. In

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conclude. Nowadays, there are various ways to do crime and increasing population growth rate,

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, in developing communities, governments have strict laws about criminal actions. Especially murder. They try to recognize the correctly criminal person and punish them,

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, by hanging a person who killed someone. In fact, they want to find others it is the end of each wrongdoer, and they do not

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, they believe that there is not enough space for all murderers.

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, the majority of individuals believe that staying in the prison is a better punishment for criminals. They can change their belief

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, and they can recover their fault with good and charity activities. They mention another point, that might judging system can not recognize real wrongdoers or make a mistake about the amount of their punishment.

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, in most Islamic countries, we face cutting hands or hanging even for a fault, without any again chance. In conclusion, due to all reasons that I mentioned above, I completely agree with

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statement that, we can give an opportunity to all criminals even the murderers to think about their actions and become regretful,as well as, try to recover their tribble act.

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In the 21st century, humans prefer to talk on social media and think it is the best way to meet. From my point of view, despite its disposal of the host of offline meetings, it is able to save a large amount of time for humans.

Differences between countries are barely evident these days . Everyone in the world is wearing the same brands and watching the same TV channels and movies. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?