in their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Advertisement is the lifeline for a business to establish its new
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in the market. I would like to discuss the impact of advertising for the new product and simaltensouly pros and cons for the same. I strongly believe in the positive
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of advertising. Overall, marketing has evolved dramatically with technology in the present era and has made a way for introducing the new product to customers with various modern strategies. In the
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we will discuss the negative points the same. For companies to survive the competition in the vast market they have to differentiate themselves from other competitors, as a
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they want to expand their sales and profits. Organizations advertise their
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to create awareness among the target customers and by marketing their new developed
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to attract competition. Some businesses are spreading false information regarding the new changes made in their finished goods.
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business, where the company is fooling customers about their new product and not delivering the right information to the public. To sum up, I feel the
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of advertising should be monitored closely by the government and have a re-investigation on various new
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has outweighed the negative developments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • novelty
  • excitement
  • latest trends
  • improvements
  • advancements
  • differentiating
  • competitors
  • innovation
  • progress
  • attracting attention
  • generating curiosity
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