you and your family family are planning to sprnd a weekend at a seaside hotel. write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. in your letter 1. tell them when you will be arriving and leaving 2. explain what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost 3. ask about activities and place of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I am writing
this
letterto
book a reservation at your hotel. My family and I have booked a trip for Correct your spelling
letter to
this
weekend. Your hotel was suggested to us by a couple of friends who have been there, and also
it Add a missing verb
is aproximity
aproximity
to the seaside. We will be arriving on the 3rd of Correct your spelling
proximity
a proximity
july
and will be departing on the 7th of Change the capitalization
July
july
2024.
My family consist of five people in total ,three teens a boy and Change the capitalization
July
two
girls and then
my wife and I. I would like to have a separate room
for my wife and I
, with an additional Change the pronoun
me
two
rooms one for my son and ther
other for my Correct your spelling
the
two
girls. My wife and I prefer a suite room
with breakfast included, with my son's
wondering if he could get a simple small Unnecessary verb
son
room
with a single bed. while
the girls will prefer having two
separate beds in the room
. I will
like to know how much it will cost us to stay for the weekend.
Apart from the Wrong verb form
would
sea
Correct your spelling
seaside
side
I Add a comma
side,
will
like to know what activities the hotel Wrong verb form
would
provide
like tours and Change the verb form
provides
game
, Fix the agreement mistake
games
in
addition
Add a comma
addition,
i
Change the capitalization
I
will
Wrong verb form
would
also
ike
to know if there are any interesting places around I could visit with my family.
I hope to hear from you soon. thank you.
Yours Sincerely,
Keziah.Correct your spelling
like
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grammar
Pay closer attention to grammar and spelling to improve clarity. For instance, 'letterto' should be 'letter to' and 'aproximity' should be 'proximity.'
clarity
Ensure consistency in terms of time references and details. For example, clarify whether you want to stay from the 3rd to the 7th of July, which is more than a weekend.
task achievement
The letter includes all necessary details: arrival and departure dates, room preferences, cost inquiry, and information about activities and places of interest.
writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitable and polite.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite