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Success in life depends on hard work and determination, or on other factors like money and personal appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is believed that
success
 is due to hard work and
determination
 to reach
the
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goals.
However
, others argue that it can be seen by visual appearance and wealth. I suppose that it depends on our effort and how we could enjoy the process.
Firstly
, it is hard to generalize the definition of
success
, every person has their own aims and steps. They should not give up no matter what happens, they have already known what the consequences are.
Thus
, they put
hard
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 work and remember that strong
determination
 in each process. The more hard work and
determination
is
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the more satisfying that achievement. I do believe that successful
people
 who could gain value and learn more, do not measure their
success
 by the materials involving money and how luxurious their lifestyle is.
Nevertheless
, some think that fashion and money have the main role to judge how convenient
people
 live. It is invisible
for
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 some societies that wealthy
people
 are successful because they could
fulfill
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 their lifestyle properly.
Then
, it depicts that they have gotten a high level of life probably
by
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 their businesses. Interestingly, many citizens try to pretend as rich
people
 to gain attention and high status in their surroundings.
This
 is a negative effect when
success
 is described by personal appearance. To conclude, it seems to me that
success
 should not be measured by visuals and money they have, which might be temporary for them
,
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 while being a
high quality
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 person through
determination
 and
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hard work
hardwork
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hard work
 is the
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long lasting
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long-lasting
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 definition of
success
.
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