Even though globalisation has about benefit to many country it negative side should not be forgotten to what extent do you agree

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international communication around the worldwide and has

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.

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created a form of living that would not experience in past ,so we expect it will be sensible to criticize it by policymakers .I will illustrate the dark side of

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other culture ,

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, if It has not well organized may be a source of anarchy for citizens ,

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,globalisms believe tourist trading is a good way

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familiar with other guys which

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growing these decades ,of

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course

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anycountry

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any country

that have more invested in

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branch give more income ,but ,local residents expressed unsatisfying of

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because

they had been

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losing

their privacy and have not a good view to be a hust

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without

allowing from them .

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nature

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a distinct capacity to handle

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harmful human activities .People have been found

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of a

golobalisation

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globalisation

globalization

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first

decision ,

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visa has been provided

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appointment to individuals who want to visit from more countries their journey ,of course, we must not ignore the burgeon local business but each country

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a distinct capacity to handle human activities in their environment ,

in addition

of due to

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freedom has unwanted

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immigration

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.

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globalisation needs to review by each government

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they must

be consider

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their public tolerance to facing

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this

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