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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The blueprints
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deceptions
, the various development
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taken
 over on the old
airport
 and
also
 provides
new
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 plan for
comming
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coming
 year. Overall, the SOUTHWEST
AIRPORT
 has been redeveloped with additional
aminities
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amenities
 and facilities provided to the tourists and increased the
airport
 area. On the one hand, the old departures and arrivals entrance has been renovated with new doors, to easily enter the lounge. In the
departures
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 section cafe is relocated towards the southwest of the doors and above
that
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 a new bag drop is installed by replacing the check-in counter, which has been shifted to the east.
Further
 new shops are constructed in the north-west of the security counter
remainig
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remaining
 unchanged, on top of that more and more gates are been introduced and the walkway is demolished for new sky train which is
seprating
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separating
 the
arivals
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arrivals
 section.
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, we can see that
old
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airport
 was not providing any kind of facility and now it is developed with new ATM machines,
cafeteria
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, and
also
 a car hire which
are
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 toward the south-east. Customs and passage to gates are unchanged . To conclude, the developed
airport
 looks more convenient for the
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pupils
puipls
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people
 to commute
for
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 the city.
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