You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

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Dear Mr. George My name is Vairag Patel, I am a part-time student of your evening Java Programming batch, I have learned many web developing and software designing skills under your guidance, but unfortunately, I am not able to continue your course from next week.
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, the reason for my immediate decision to discontinue
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course is that, I am working in a Subway restaurant full-time and my owner has offered me an opportunity to be a manager of his branch,
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offer alleviates my pay scale and increases my management skills. Not only did I achieve a salary increment but
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helped me to reserve my immigration status in
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country.
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, I am aware of
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course and the future job-related benefits of programming experience, In
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situation, I have to change my path and will continue to increase my experience in the food processing industry which will allow me to receive my permanent Recendency status in Canada. I hope you understand my situation and approve my decision, I am looking forward to your response in
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matter. Yours Sincerely, Vaiarg
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a single idea, such as the introduction, explanation, and proposed action.
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Ensure that explanations are detailed and comprehensible to support your decision logically and convincingly.
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The letter maintains a polite and formal tone, appropriate for addressing a teacher.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a greeting and a closing, making it structured and courteous.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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