A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am an avid reader of your esteemed magazine and glad to know that you are seeking responses from the readers regarding an
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to include in an upcoming article. I am fond of personality development books and read a
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cover to cover which helped me in
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as well as personal
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. The title of the
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is "Ikigai", it highlights the Japanese
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technique
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to find a true purpose in our lives.
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, it captivates the reader by giving
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scenarios from Okinawa village.
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motivated me to introspect my
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and helped me to quit my mundane job and start a cafe. It inspired me to follow my passion and
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gave me an ecstatic
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is intriguing and one should read it time and again to
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and
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consequently
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will assist them to find a genuine purpose
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. Looking forward to seeing a write-up on the
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. Your's faithfully, Devika
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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