Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people and experts believe that expanding public
transportation
, like busses and subways is one of
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essential duties.
As a result
, government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. I firmly agree with
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idea and in
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I will discuss my reasons.
firstly
, a
well designed
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, cheap and convenient public
transportation
system, certainly motivates people not to use their own
cars
, since they can reduce fuel costs and
automobile's
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frustration
this
way.
as a result
, air
plution
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pollution
will decline, particularly in large and industrial cities where industrial
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pollution
polution
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pollution
, aggravates car
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pollution
polution
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pollution
.
Secondly
, when public
transportation
customers increase, automobile factories will put their effort to produce cheap and
low fuel consuming
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cars
to maintain their clients.
In addition
, we can
also
expect, more types of electric and solar
cars
in the market that assists
decreasing
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the
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air
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pollution
polution
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pollution
. To sum up,
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government
gvernment
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government
investment
on
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cheap and
high quality
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public
transportation
worth
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it's
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expences
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as
it's benefits
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overweighs its costs. it will reduce the air
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pollution
polution
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pollution
, both by motivating individuals not to use their personal
cars
and car companies to expand low fuel
consuming
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and clean energy car
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production
prodction
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production
lines.
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  • sustainable transport
  • carbon footprint
  • mass transit
  • subsidization
  • fare reduction
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • public policy
  • commuter behavior
  • infrastructural development
  • economic efficiency
  • equitable access
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