There is a belief that a
person
's
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can be deceitful. It is a belief that
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agree with
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because in my opinion, a
person
's look does not mean anything
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if we do not know
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their personality
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or feelings.
On the one hand, some
people
can be seen
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and stiff while other
people
have seen
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more polite and kind.
However
, the look does not always show the truth,
for example
, sometimes at work executives can be strict and push others
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hard
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.
Therefore
, others can think that these executives are not
people
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which
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is not always true.
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kinds of
people
can be more friendly in their social life but at
it can be hard to be friendly because of
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business career.
On the other hand
,
people
who look strong are not always the strongest
people
we know.
For instance
, we can think that fathers are strong and they never fail or feel bad about anything but
this
is totally deceitful because every
person
can fail or feel bad about anything. I think some
people
are trying to seem different
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they feel and live. Especially, if someone is not rich they try to
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like a rich
person
.
In conclusion, in my
people
must show their real feelings and lives to
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other
people
.
Otherwise
,
people
will not trust each other and it will cause bad relationships.