People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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a significant role in everyone's lives and getting a chance to go to
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University
is an incredible thing to have. There are various
reasons
people
want to go to
college
, some go for higher education, some for better
career
preparation, some want to enhance knowledge and many more
reasons
. As far as I am concerned, I think
people
attend
college
for their good
career
and for networking. I think
this
way for two
reasons
, which I will explore in
this
essay. As an initial point, I believe that for a better
career
one must have a good educational qualification, which is possible only through education, which can be done by going to
college
.
For instance
, my
friend
's
farther
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father
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have
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their own
business
, it's their family
business
. My
friend
is
found
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fond
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of studies,
therefore
, he did his graduation and post-graduation
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from
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form
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from
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renowned
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a renowned
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University
and
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with a scholarship. Now, because of his studies, he took his family
business
to new heights of success, and
as a result
, they are expanding their
business
to an international level. Nowadays, my
friend
is the CEO of his company.
Hence
,
University
played a significant role in making
the
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career
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my
friend
.
Subsequently
, in ,
college
we meet different types of
people
, some of them are from different backgrounds and some
they
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are from the same background. In
college
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we learn and get a chance to interact with different types of
people
.
For example
, when I was doing my post-graduation at
University
, I met one of my classmates, who was from Spain. We both have different cultures and backgrounds and later on we become good friends. We have
lot
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of things in common and we used to study together. Even, in our
friend
's group, most of the
people
are from different countries, and we together enjoy
a
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ourselves a
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lot. In conclusion, I would like to say that,
people
attend
University
for their better
career
preparation and for networking.
Therefore
, I feel both
reasons
are prerequisites for a good life.
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