Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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the medicine has made titanic advancements over the

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few years, the trust in it has been

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a decline.

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, there is a growing demand for

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medicines

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and treatments that do not heed established science and rely on traditional forms of treatments In my view,

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development is a dire one and will have a significantly negative impact on general health.

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, using

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medicines

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is most likely perilous and may well give

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to dangerous health hazards. Since

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has not been scientifically proven, there

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not any concrete evidence that a

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will have the intended result and often, it will worsen the symptoms and fail catastrophically. Take the case of Steve Jobs, he was

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diagnosed

with cancer but

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of starting the

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suggested by doctors, he opted for

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medicines

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. A choice that cost him his life.

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, the ones who practice

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medicines

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rarely have the good of their patients in mind.

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, they even may charge more than a usual doctor because they are usually self-appointed experts that are less common than doctors and

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more valuable.

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,

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for a routine sickness does not cost much using modern

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as they are more mainstream,

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, to treat the same sickness the

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medicines

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practitioner may charge more.

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, I think the modern

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of treating diseases is the best

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it is true that it does not always yield the expected results, it should not hinder its effectiveness and make people opt for other kinds of treatments as they, in the best case, do not work.