People are living in a “throwaway society”, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

Nowadays, it become more common for
people
to buy new things frequently. At the same time,
this
may
also
encourage them to throw away some stuff
that is
still useable.
This
trend affects our environment. 
People
tend to buy new things because of the advertisement that can be easily seen in many media.
For example
, many companies advertise their product through social media.
Moreover
, they use algorithms to detect their customer preferences. So they can provide some advertisements that match their consumer need. Another reason is, with
this
busy lifestyle, nobody has time to fix the things that have stopped working. Actually, buying the new one is a lot easier.
However
,
this
trend has become a serious problem
to
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the environment. The production of goods leads to cultivating natural resources. If there
are
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demand from the customer, companies tend to produce more goods in order to have plenty of goods available.
In addition
, when
people
throw away stuff. It becomes
wastes
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. Many of the products in the market are not able to recycle. So the products will
last
long on our earth forever. I would say that
this
is the root cause of global warming. In conclusion, It is undeniable that
people
throw away their stuff more frequently.
However
, considering the impact that may have on the environment is essential. So the government should launch campaigns to create environmental awareness about the danger of
this
action and regulate laws for firms to use recycled material in their products.
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