Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Everyone

remembers playing in the playgrounds when they were a child and once in a while there was a fight.

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were

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always the same kids, but there is a problem. A study that was done among children, suggested that there

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lot more fights than a couple of years ago.

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in bullies, how can we help

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and is violence a tool to help

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problem

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the bullies,

everyone

remembers at least one bully

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your

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elementary school. I always had

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person that was making

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fun of

everyone

's clothing and how they were looking. My

parents

always told me to not get angry at them or say something back, because they will pick at

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more.

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,

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was really hard

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for a young person it is easier said than done but it worked for me and they stopped picking at me.

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if the bullies get physical it is a whole other story.

Everyone

agrees that violence is not the way to handle

this

. But many young children see no option

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to hit back and start a fight. I can understand why these children are doing that, because when measures are not working like talking with the teachers,

parents

or even worse getting suspended. If

this

is the case

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in my point of view I think

parents

can say to

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child to hit back. To conclude,

this

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never the case. Normally the bully will stop after some measures and if

this

is the case the

parents

should always tell

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kids

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to not use violence.