You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - Invite him/her to the event - Explain why you think he/she would like the event - Tell him/her about the other activities you can do.

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Dear Mark, I hope

this

letter finds you well at home. I would like to invite you to our country's biggest event, organised on 26 January.

This

is an important date for India. Since it is our 'Republic

Day

' and the

Indian

constitution was implemented on

this

day

, in 1950. For all

Indian

citizens,

this

is considered to be a proud

day

and it has been celebrated every year in India's capital Delhi at Red Fort. I am certainly sure that you are going to love

this

event.As you are always fascinated by

Indian

Culture, you will get the chance to see the diverse culture of our nation.Numerous people will perform there according to the custom of their provinces

Moreover

, the

Indian

Prime minister will address the country's Army, Navy and Airforce.The defence will display their powers with tanks and guns.Air jets will spread tri colours of the

Indian

Flag in the sky and perform spectacular flying skills. Apart from

this

, there are many other things we will do on that

day

.We will fly the kites which generally people do on

this

date.We will try several old cuisines of the old Delhi area which are famous for their delicious taste and rich spices.I will

also

escort you to many monuments in the city. I hope you will have a wonderful time here so don't miss

this

chance. See you soon. Sourabh Grover

Submitted by sourabhgr1 on Mon Jul 04 2022

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