Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead do?

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we throw a
lot
of
things
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research and a recent survey suggested that
people
throw 40% of
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old broken stuff away, whereas 20 years ago
this
number was only 10%. In
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I will discuss
what
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the factors
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that
causes
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cause
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this
phenomenon and what the effects are. The
first
reason why I think that
people
throw a
lot
of
things
away
,
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is because nowadays
things
are a
lot
cheaper. A
lot
of
people
buy
things
on cheap
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sites,
such
as Alibaba, when it is broken they just throw it away and buy a new one. Because they think that it is not worth the time to fix the broken product. The
second
reason is that the products are broken more often,
this
is due to the bad quality of the cheap online websites. But how does the world
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phenomenon
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, the
first
obvious thing is there is a
lot
more waste. If all of
this
waste is recycled
probrably
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probably
, it is not a problem.
However
,
this
is not the case, which
result
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in environmental issues, you can see the results of
this
everywhere in the world. The
second
thing is that the
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benefits from it,
this
is because
people
buy more
things
, which
result
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results
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in
a
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economic rise inside the country.
Oppenents
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Opponents
say that there are
also
jobs
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closed
losed
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because
people
just order new
things
.
However
, in my point of
view
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this
is not the case, because products that cost a
lot
of money, will get repaired,
such
as a dishwasher or a computer. These items are
to
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expensive to be replaced with a new item, so they often will get fixed.
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