The
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of young
peopleChange noun form
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leadership in all the
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of bureaucracy is debatable and it is increasingly becoming popular. Many
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a belief that it is good for a
,
other
think it is inadequate. In
essay, I shall analyse both perspectives and aI personally side with the former view.
The main reason why some
are in favour of young blood holding
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vital position in the government is that young
have more energy to work for a
.
, they are more enthusiastic and jealous than others which helps them to tackle any tough situation easily.
, they are more willing to try new things and inventions which may lead a provincial forward and help to develop
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.
, younger pupils have more spirit than older to work. In my town 5 years ago, we have a 70 years old city councillor who has lots of physical diseases and most of the time he lives in a hospital. His illness becomes a carrier of our
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development. But now we have a councillor who is 32 years old and have more fit to work for shining our city. S, if a country wants to exuberant their situation in the world, they have to include more and more
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in authority.
, other
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think that folk who are young and leading significant post
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state administration is not perfect because they have a higher possibility of making huge fault by them.
may lead to a country under global pressure. Youngsters have less mind to understand any big issue.
, that have lack experience than
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older citizens. Because
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,
itCorrect pronoun usage
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they can easily mistake any vital issue that could cost a country. A few days ago, another state councillor of my
who is young made a mistake due to his less experienced to take any right decision at the right time resulting in 50 dwellers who lived in that place
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reasons
some think it is
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suitable for
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To sum up, in present days holding an important part of administration by young
is increasingly popular.
there are many
who think it is a positive turn, other
argued with them. Discussing both views I find that the negative side of
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leading youngsters is completely negligible with positive aspects. I think the more young
have a
in the main position, the greater development there will be.