Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social networking.

In today’s fast-paced world, the issue of using social networking has stirred up a number of heated debates among

people

of different opinions as some

people

come up with the idea that it brings several benefits to

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society,

nonetheless

, the remaining do not accept the idea. So

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, the advantages and disadvantages of

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issue will be discussed in the following paragraphs in turn.

First

of all, social networking is making

people

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lives more convenient and easier these days.

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the

help

of social networking, the world becomes a village and we can contact

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everyone, everywhere.

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the

help

of its algorithm, we can reconnect

our

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long-lost friends.

Besides

, we can learn the

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vest

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majority of new things

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the

help

of

internet

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and social networking.

Thus

, it is a very helpful fact for

people

in

self- development

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. Most importantly, social networking really helps

people

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lives during

this

pandemic, COVID-19. Not by the

help

of social networking, it will be hard for contacting each other for certain purposes,

such

as grocery buying, working, study

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or etc.

On the other hand

, on the downside, some

people

who are addicted to using social networking are not able to concentrate

nor

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focus

in

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their self-company. Using social networking can take a huge amount of time without noticing it. Using social media is addictive and as a consequence, it will keep high screen time,

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it

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can lead to

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damage to brain cells, neurone system and sleep disorder.

In addition

, it can

also

spill the employees in the workplace that they might not be able to accomplish their daily tasks. Social networking can

also

be seen as a major entertainment not only for teenagers

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but

also

for older

people

.

Moreover

, as

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social networking can reduce

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personal interaction, we can lack

of

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emotional connection and interaction with friends. The

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thing is about security and

scamming

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. It is not important if the user is

skillful

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, but for

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older

people

and other uneducated

people

, it will have the concern of scammers. All things of both advantages and disadvantages, it is simply considered as we are now living in a fascinating constantly changing world, social networking is important. Because we have to make the best of every opportunity, and adapt and keep up with changing events. But we need to be careful not to

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over use

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social networking.