Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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The more developed the technology, the more choices we can have. Some
people
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assume that we have
lots
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of options
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these days. I definitely agree with
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statement.
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,
people
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have
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a plethora
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of choices not only in
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field but
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in
business
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the business
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area.
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, there are
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of classes which are cost-effective, can give great facilities and
popular
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are popular
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among teenagers when they decide to attend the classes.
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, there are various styles of learning
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as self-study, online learning which are too popular nowadays and learning in classrooms. After that, there are many jobs to choose
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on their interests. If they want to get
high
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a high
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salary, there are some companies which can give them
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salary. And
then
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, the other companies offer them great opportunities
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as going abroad, giving
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and great facilities.
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, there are
lots
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of brands in
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item
such
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as cars, phones and motorbikes.
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there was only
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brand for
one
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product in the olden days, there are
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of brands for
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item.
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,
people
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can choose everything depending on their situations. The more finance they can spend, the greater quality they can get.
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, they can choose both
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and size which they wish. As there are
lots
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of options
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these days, every standard of
people
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can use every item depending on their budget. In conclusion, the more choices they can have, the wider their eyes
.
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are.
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As
the
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technology is developing day by day,
people
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have many options nowadays.
Therefore
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, I totally agree with
this
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statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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