There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweight the benefits of mobile phone?
In the modern era, there is a huge development in smartphones which are essential in an individual's daily life. Some
people
claimed that,
these devices create problems Remove the comma
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such
as social, medical and technical issues when used . However
, in this
,essay
I will describe what are the benefits of smartphones and how it is overweight these issues.
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To begin
with, it is difficult to find people
who do not use
mobile phones
which have lots of useful applications. So most of the younger generation use
these for their educational purposes and important situation . For instance
, Due to the co-vid pandemic situation in 2020, children could not go to institutions. So government arrange virtual classes without arranging the facilities for that. The people
who could not afford a computer, use
smartphones facility to learn. In addition
to that, when there is an important situation occurs such
as find
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finding
use
their phones
to browse the location services.it helps people
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a smartphone
smartphone
.
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On the other hand
, there are health hazards. Most consumers use
their phones
daily and use
headphones to listen. Also
, they do not consider the recommended volume which is leads
to hearing problems. Change the verb form
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Furthermore
, they are watching the screen . Because of its brightness, eyesight will be affected.for instance
, teenagers play video
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a video
game
without getting Fix the agreement mistake
games
break
. So it will lead them to have those health hazards as I explained.Add an article
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Thus
there are drawbacks due to the usage of smart devices.
To conclude, most people
use
mobile phones
ignoring its
drawbacks.If Correct pronoun usage
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people
consider those factors, most of
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health
hazards can be prevented. So I strongly agree with the state even though there are some negative aspects when using mobile devices.Add an article
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