The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps illustrate some changes in the way people accessed a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that
the main differences in road
access to this
hospital involve intersection upgrades and the development of parking spaces and bus facilities.
From 2007 to 2010, the most striking change is the appearance of two new roundabouts. The first one was constructed at the three-way junction of the hospital road
and the ring road
surrounding the hospital, while
the second
one was located at the four-way intersection of the hospital road
and the city road
.
Looking at the other features, we can see that the six bus stops, situated along the hospital road
, were removed to make way for a new bus station to
the western side of Change preposition
on
this
road
. In terms of parking spaces, a new public car park was constructed to
the eastern side of the hospital and people could access Change preposition
on
this
car park via the ring road
, while
the old parking lot became a staff-only area.Submitted by phuongthao.3822 on
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