The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps illustrate some changes in the way people accessed a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that
the main differences in
road
access to
this
hospital involve intersection upgrades and the development of parking spaces and bus facilities. From 2007 to 2010, the most striking change is the appearance of two new roundabouts. The first one was constructed at the three-way junction of the hospital
road
and the ring
road
surrounding the hospital,
while
the
second
one was located at the four-way intersection of the hospital
road
and the city
road
. Looking at the other features, we can see that the six bus stops, situated along the hospital
road
, were removed to make way for a new bus station
to
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the western side of
this
road
. In terms of parking spaces, a new public car park was constructed
to
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the eastern side of the hospital and people could access
this
car park via the ring
road
,
while
the old parking lot became a staff-only area.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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