People say that a child’s success is dependent on the way parents bring them up. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Ostensibly,
parents
play an indispensable part in the success
of their children
because they are often considered as
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the
primary teacher for them. I agree with Change the word
their
this
notion as parents
not only teach them how to deal with pressure but also
support the dreams of their offspring. This
essay will delve deeper into these points in the impending paragraphs.
To begin
with, being the first
teacher, parents
teach their children
about the process of handling pressure which is a major factor to determine their success
in life
. To cite an example, A survey conducted by The Guardian Newspaper in March 2015 revealed that 55% of people had been accepting the contribution of their parents
' instructions in their success
because they enlightened them to face off
the ups and downs of their Change preposition
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life
at an early age. Hence
, if a child, with the guidance of his parents
, is capable enough to treat victory and failure calmly, such
nature may lead him to a successful professional life
.
Furthermore
, a parent's role is a catalyst for a better life
for their children
as they may always support their dreams. For example
, World Child Care, a department of the UK, mentioned in its annual report in May 2016 that 65% of children
were able to score good grades in their studies since their parents
always stood by them by providing financial support. In fact, the replies of these children
in the report also
mentioned that no sooner did they perform bad
in their studies than their Change the adjective
badly
parents
ensured a proper disciplined and well organised
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well-organised
life
at home and certainly, this
approach made them able to perform well.
To conclude, it is unequivocal that the efficacy of children
is directly proportional to the way their parents
raise them. I think if children
follow the teachings of their parents
, success
will follow them in future.Submitted by Mrjit147 on
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