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show different accommodation choices by holidaymakers in the three years 1965, 1985 and 2005.

#show #accommodation #choices #holidaymakers #three #years
The pie graph
compare
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 the proportion of critical
choices
 by
holidaymarkes
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holidaymakers
 in three
years
 which are 1965 , 1985 , and 2005 Overall , it is clear that the
relatives
 in 1965 were the most significant
choices
, while the
caravans
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caravan's
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choices
 were the least . In comparison , at the end of the period, the
hotel
choices
 became the highest number followed by
relatives
 . As the graph
show
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, from 1965 to 2005 , the situation changed drastically in the shear of
choices
 , so the
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highest
higest
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highest
 figure of
choices
 in 1965 was the
relatives
 , at 55% and the
hotel
select
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 was the highest amount in 2005 , with 35 % .
However
 , in
the
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both
years
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 the lowest amount
were
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 the caravans
an
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the
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camping , less than 21% . Regarding
years
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the years
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 1985 , obviously
hotel
choices
 were much higher than the caravans
choices
 , just 37% and 10% respectively .
Acoording
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According
 the
relatives
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choices
were
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gradual decrease over the period ,
on the contrary
 , the
hotel
choices
 increased sharply through the
years
 from 16% to 38%
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