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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons than from other sources ? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is irrefutable that today's digital technology is so vast and
students
 can gain immense knowledge from the internet. Many people believe that
students
 learn more from their
teachers
 in offline classes. I agree with the former statement and
this
 essay will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there is a large amount of information available on the internet.
Students
 can learn many things from the internet But due to virtual platforms,they do not show interest to learn.
For instance
, during COVID, schools were closed and the study was online. Pupils did not show interest in online learning and
consequently
, they lagged behind the studies. So, it is clear that manual learning is far better than online learning.
Moreover
, there is another factor of manual learning is
students
 get the attraction to their
teachers
. They communicate face to face and can ask anything without hesitation. It
also
 builds confidence among pupils. There is
also
 a fear of
teachers
 so they focus on their studies.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the Indian government found that
students
 who attract
teachers
 directly on daily basis get more marks than online learners.
Furthermore
, they are more helpful, socialising and obedient. To conclude, in my opinion, I believe that digital learning provides a platform for learning but
students
 do not like to learn online. There are more benefits of manual learning as they become more confident, helpful and socialize which helps them in future.
Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on

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