Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
say that
music
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is
a good way of bringing
people
of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Music
has been a powerful tool in human history. It is considered to be a means to unite
nations
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a common arena and many
people
, myself included, believe
music
can help countries come together and stress their uniqueness and similarities in subtle ways. Primarily, the language of
music
is universal and
hence
, can be understood by
people
of various ethnicities without translation of the lyrics, necessarily. Some may question the level of effectiveness of songs as not many
people
might be impressed with the
music
alone unable to understand the meaning.
However
, the musical part of the song does it all by affecting the soul and spirit of the listeners, especially, if and as long as they are willing to appreciate it.
Music
, indeed, has no boundaries, it cannot be limited by artificial borders of countries provided that the inspiration in it is powerful enough.
Therefore
, there are lots of international events
such
as
music
festivals,
concerts
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and concerts
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alike where representatives of various
nations
stage together to perform their traditional
music
while conveying their
people
’s imprinted feelings in their
music
even though the language is not understandable. It is
also
true that
music
eases tensions between
nations
‘reminding’ that there are other common arenas (other than political) that bring different cultures and ages together.
Although
not everyone is inclined to listen to the same
music
, partial popularity of the
music
among
people
of a country is enough to form affection towards the source nation of the
music
. Take an example of
Turkish
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music
industry. The powerful melody
their
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of their
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songs have already gained popularity around the world,
hence
, uniting and getting the other
nations
listening to their song to appreciate their tunes.
Besides
that,
music
is capable of attracting
people
of various age groups. So, it is natural to encounter children and the elderly performing or enjoying the
music
side-by-side in
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concerts. In conclusion, thanks to
universal
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understandability and
moving
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nature of it,
music
is indeed a formidable force to bring
people
of the world together no matter where they come from or how old they are.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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