You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday Write a letter inviting your friend. In your letter: tell your friend about your birthday explain how much the visit would mean to you suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit

Dear Abhinav, How’re you? It’s been so long since we

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were in touch but I haven’t forgotten all the

wonderfuI

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wonderful

times we have spent together. It’s my

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birthday

bithday

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birthday

coming up on 02 May 2022 and I wanted to invite you for the celebrations. Since

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is going to be my 30th birthday, I am planning to make it a bit more special by inviting all my loved ones. Do you remember the TGIF restaurant?, I’ve mentioned you multiple times. It’s my favourite place! I’ve booked it for the party night. I really want you to come over on

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special day as it would mean a lot. You’ve always supported me in my tough times when I was there with you in Abu Dhabi.

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celebration will not be complete without your presence. I guess,

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is going to be your

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trip to India, so if it is comfortable for you, I’ll arrange your stay at my house. That way we’ll

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get more time to spend with each other.

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, my family would be delighted to meet you. I really hope you can make it to my birthday. Take care and write back soon, Regards, -Rubina

msrubinagill

Jul 7, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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199 words

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