You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Mr John, I am Supun Kularatne, who moved recently into the property at Bravery Street. I am writing

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we are in the process of making ourselves comfortable in our new home. I am really happy with the neighbourhood and the structure of the house, it is quite the same as I saw in the photographs that send me during our negotiations. By the way, I some found furniture in the master bedroom which needs some attention. Especially, the wardrobe closet. Some of its drawers are really hard to move.

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, the writing table makes some noise when I put something on it. Since we moved here recently, and we are still new to English speaking neighbourhood, it would be a great help if you can come over here and help us by contacting someone who can fix these issues or please let me know the whereabouts of a place where I can go and do an exchange. I would appreciate your immediate attention to

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matter and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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