You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he/she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kajol Dave. I am one of the students living in hostel room number 102. I am writing

this

letter to express my annoyance regarding the irresponsible

behavior

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of my roommate, Kinjal. During these parties, she invites many friends from out of the hostel who is not permitted to enter as per hostel rules and regulations.

Firstly

, I thought it will be ended in a couple of days but she organized the parties each alternate day.

Furthermore

, she invites her outside friends who speak a very bad language, and

also

plays music at a high sound,

Hence

it affects my studies and sleeping time too.

Therefore

, for the purpose of stopping

this

, I want to request you kindly take appropriate action against her

this

upcoming weekend or provide me with a single room, so that I can study with concentration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Kajol Dave

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