The best way to solve the world's enviromental prolem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Global environmental issues are extremely affecting the lives of mankind.

Although

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some people argue that

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price hike would eventually resolve these problems, I am of the belief that it's not just increasing the cost of

fuel

, but it should be a collective responsibility of individuals and the government.

Firstly

, the number one environmental problem the world is facing is the increasing amount of carbon dioxide emissions in the atmosphere.

This

is primarily due to the burning of fossil fuels which comes from the utilization of oil. Cars and other vehicles,

for instance

,

use

a great amount of petrol for transportation. With the considerable figures in the number of automobiles roaming around the streets , a significant rise in the exhaust fumes produced by

this

technology would

further

enhance the production of carbon dioxide. With

this

, an act to increase the cost of

fuel

would be a deterrent to the people.

Secondly

, individuals should be aware and be responsible enough so as not to aggravate the situation.

For example

, the

use

of power-saving technology is a good way to help conserve

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nature.

In addition

, certain modern technologies should be turned off

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supply if they are not in

use

because these

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fuel

as well.

Furthermore

, there should be more stringent policies and rules that the government should be implementing especially for businessmen. To illustrate

this

, the total prohibition on the

use

of plastics by large supermarkets should be banned once and for all.

As a result

,

this

would immensely be of a great impact

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our community. In summary, it is not only by increasing the cost of

fuel

our environmental problems can be solved

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but with great understanding and responsibility of the society along with efforts from the government.