The best way to solve the world's enviromental prolem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Global environmental issues are extremely affecting the lives of mankind.

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some people argue that

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price hike would eventually resolve these problems, I am of the belief that it's not just increasing the cost of

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, but it should be a collective responsibility of individuals and the government.

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, the number one environmental problem the world is facing is the increasing amount of carbon dioxide emissions in the atmosphere.

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is primarily due to the burning of fossil fuels which comes from the utilization of oil. Cars and other vehicles,

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,

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a great amount of petrol for transportation. With the considerable figures in the number of automobiles roaming around the streets , a significant rise in the exhaust fumes produced by

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technology would

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enhance the production of carbon dioxide. With

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, an act to increase the cost of

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would be a deterrent to the people.

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, individuals should be aware and be responsible enough so as not to aggravate the situation.

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, the

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of power-saving technology is a good way to help conserve

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nature.

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, certain modern technologies should be turned off

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supply if they are not in

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because these

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as well.

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, there should be more stringent policies and rules that the government should be implementing especially for businessmen. To illustrate

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, the total prohibition on the

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of plastics by large supermarkets should be banned once and for all.

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would immensely be of a great impact

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our community. In summary, it is not only by increasing the cost of

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our environmental problems can be solved

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but with great understanding and responsibility of the society along with efforts from the government.