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Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

#car #insurance #company #amount #month
Dear Mr, I am writing
this
 letter to you to draw your attention to the recent decision about changing your
insurance
 fees which definitely has a lot of impact on my life quality. As you know, due to some reasons which most important of them is facing with corona pandemic the costs of all goods and services have a significant increase. So most people are in undesirable conditions.
Therefore
, increasing your fee creates a bad situation for all citizens. I think, all
insurance
 companies must create new conditions for their customer,
for example
, they can consider fewer
insurance
 fees for drivers who safe drive, and
also
, more charges for high-risk drivers.
In addition
, maybe can the cost of
insurance
 divided into more
installments
Change the spelling
instalments
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.
Finally
, I have the expectation of you give me a good discount or consider my
insurance
 fee to accord
last
 year because I was a good driver and did not have an accident. Thank you for taking your time and your consideration of my letter. I looking forward to hearing about my concern. Yours sincerely, Salehi
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