Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affects individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend.
Competition is
effective
trait for individuals in communities. Add an article
an effective
This
essay will discuss how competitiveness affects species and if it a
good or bad trend.
For humans to survive, they have to compete with other people in Add a missing verb
is a
orderfor
them to satisfy their needs. The population in our society today is becoming more than the resources available to sustain everyone. There is a saying that survival is for the fittest. Correct your spelling
order for
This
has made individuals have the mentality that they need to strive for them to get the best. There is a popular Television program called the Lions
den. Change to a genitive case
Lion's
This
programme is organized to sponsor someone who has a potent idea to invent something or needs fund
to produce a particular product in large quantity or finance to expand their business. Fix the agreement mistake
funds
Although
The Folks who go for this
offer have to compete with their mate in other for them to be able to meet with the investors, The investors will only invest on
the adults who can convince them to put their resources into their business. Change preposition
in
This
way, the person who is able to win the deal is the individual that is
able to persuade the sponsors.
In my own idea, Competitiveness as
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apply
assist
humans to do things they never imagine they can do, it has helped to build human confidence and Change the verb form
assisting
also
increase large
number of folk to Change the article
a large
the large
discover
new things and how Wrong verb form
discovering
it
can be done in different ways. Being competitive helps youngsters to be able to achieve success in their education and vocational training. For every successful competition, there is always a reward. Correct pronoun usage
they
For instance
, in a football game, different
team comes together to compete for a trophy. The best team will win not by chance but by the effort they put in the game.
To conclude, the drive population shows as an encouraging quality in most Add an article
the different
a different
nation
. It has been discussed that it has an optimistic movement on societyFix the agreement mistake
nations
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite