Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It usually appears that humankind is divided into two sides upside and downside.

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particularly reason some

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think that with the sin

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would have to

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amount of they have done while, others seem like they did some harmful with some specific reason by

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about that

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should be more flexible about deciding on the

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I give my own opinion. On the

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hand, more and more

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believe that there some offences should be more tough

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by the law because

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is getting significantly increased in a few decades. Put more simply, some young

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didn't know about they are getting some kind of violent and obstaractacle.

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brave women tell her story of violence by their close

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when she was a child but that person who does

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harmful offence already died without any

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a pity girl is living like hell.

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statement who have done some sin have to deserve some

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has done their sin in some other circumstances of an individual offence.

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is a 2021 phone call to the police officer about 2 Bulgars from the small groceries market. They stole just soda cola 2l. the Bulgars are just kids about 15 years old but they were getting tough punishments

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believe that judgement is always true.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

fixed punishments
consistency
predictability
deter crime
potential offenders
streamline
judicial process
bias
corruption
complexity
human behavior
circumstances
justice system
intent
remorse
socio-economic background
rehabilitate offenders
recidivism rates
flexible punishment systems
inconsistencies
perceived injustices
public trust

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