Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It usually appears that humankind is divided into two sides upside and downside.
One
particularly reason some
people
think that with the sin
people
would have to
punishment
amount of they have done while, others seem like they did some harmful with some specific reason by
crime
about that
people
should be more flexible about deciding on the
punishment
. In
this
essay, I intend to discuss both these views and at the end of
this
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I give my own opinion. On the
one
hand, more and more
people
believe that there some offences should be more tough
punishment
by the law because
crime
is getting significantly increased in a few decades. Put more simply, some young
people
didn't know about they are getting some kind of violent and obstaractacle.
As a result
, there were noticing everything that happened after.
One
of the perfect examples of
this
is
last
week I heard a true story from a Youtube blog
that is
brave women tell her story of violence by their close
people
when she was a child but that person who does
this
harmful offence already died without any
punishment
by law.
That is
a pity girl is living like hell.
Therefore
, I totally agree with
this
statement who have done some sin have to deserve some
punishment
for fit.
On the other hand
, some
people
think that
crime
has done their sin in some other circumstances of an individual offence.
That is
to say that they might cover their own body from the freaky
people
,
Consequently
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they had been some
crime
without their
brain
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.
One
particularly good example of
this
is a 2021 phone call to the police officer about 2 Bulgars from the small groceries market. They stole just soda cola 2l. the Bulgars are just kids about 15 years old but they were getting tough punishments
such
as spending 12 years in jail.
However
, I disagree with
this
statement. by way of conclusion, I once again restate my view that some murderers have to get super hard
punishment
for what they have done by the law ,not outlaw. But some other
crime
just protects their body from a bad person so that they have done some offence. I
also
believe that judgement is always true.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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