Mobile phones are considered essential by most people nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones

In recent years, the popularity of mobile

phones

has seen a long-term gradual

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over the world. Some of the population believed that it has significant

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for

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, others argue that these

devices

have

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impact. In

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essay, both pros and cons will be explained and provided the reason why I think

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innovation facilitates

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human

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.

To begin

with, mobile

phones

significantly simplify our life. In

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, these

devices

are useful and sufficient

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in case of emergency.

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, in case a person faces a complication or urgently requires help from others, he can easily

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reach someone appropriate by making a phone call.

Besides

, these technological products allow the users

connect

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the

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internet for accessing information to solve

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issues immediately, increasing

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efficiency.

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, a survey conducted in Hong Kong reports that citizens prefer to use

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mobile

phones

searching

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the solution online rather

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in black and white, especially, related to electronic

devices

.

On the other hand

, it significant causes physical health and disturbs your original plan if there have unlimited use. To illustrate

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point, these

devices

allow the user

communicate

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with their parents and relatives online, it is not mandatory to leave home for some meetings and events, and the population tend to

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physical excises.

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, a vast of teenagers not only use

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mobile

phones

for communication purposes

,

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but

also

playing

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games,

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and spending

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time on online social platforms.

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, Scientists report that

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majority of youngsters are addicted

in

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mobile

phones

for entertaining purposes,

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is

significant

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harmful

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to their health because of

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of excises, casing eye issues, increasing

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heart disease, and diabetes. In conclusion, these technological

devices

significantly increased the efficiency

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problem

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and communication despite

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causes

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addiction and health problems.

In personally

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, I believed that these

devices

contributes

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to our daily life in a positive way if it is well-monitored on time

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