Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include: Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement

Dear sir /madam, I am writing

this

letter to give you some feedback about your latest edition of Business Magazine.

Last

week, I was travelling from New Delhi to Mumbai through rail. I wanted to read some business news while travelling. At the New Delhi railway station, I saw many magazines and novels. I decided to buy your journal because I was fascinated by its cover story about the Oil price hike. I was thoroughly impressed by all the articles and research which were mentioned in it. I had read many business books but no one had given as detailed information as it was in that magazine.

However

, there were some parts that I didn't find well,

such

as no graph or chart and the low quality of the paper. I would like to suggest for the betterment of your magazine

Firstly

, few diagrams like Pie Charts and line graphs must include because it will help the reader to compare the ventures performances.

Secondly

, improve the quality of the paper and try to make it colourful. I hope you will consider my views as it will assist your book to be sold more in the market. Yours faithfully, Sourabh Grover