As a result of deforestation and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem?

As humans have been moving towards development over

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few centuries, it has been inversely impacting the wildlife around us.

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requirement for

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development

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has been more land to create infrastructure which is leading to more deforestation and ultimately resulting in endangering or

extinction

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of some animal

species

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. Illegal hunting has

also

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added fuel to

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grave concern. In

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essay, I will outline the importance of protecting

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wildlife and explain some

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to tackle

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problem.

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play an important role in

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the ecological balance of our nature. Indeed, every

species

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plays a crucial role in the food chain established by the nature. Tigers,

for instance

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, were on the verge of

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back due to illegal hunting and their habitat being destroyed while expanding our cities. If they would have become extinct, it would have created

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gap in our food chain. Without a doubt,

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and

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have to coexist in the world and

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of either can have

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negative

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in years to come.

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, we still have time to correct our actions and treat

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with equal importance as ourselves. Two ways can

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us to handle the issue at hand,

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. One is to again recreate the natural

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habitat

for the

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by developing various national parks throughout the country,

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, they should be protected from illegal hunters,

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, Jim Corbett National Park.

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should bring new laws to have strict punishment against those who are involved in illegal hunting.

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will create fear in the mind of

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offenders and help

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the endangered

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. In conclusion, there is no denial

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the fact that many animal

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have become endangered due to

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motives of humans.

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we have made enough damage to various

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, there is still time to acknowledge the importance of

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and take necessary

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measure

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to prevent the endangered

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from

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.