Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary day and age, many young people are interested in

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and many schools are encouraging students to be a part of them. In my opinion, I totally agree with the notion that

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should be a compulsory part of

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high school programmes. I will expound on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.

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, working as

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(working for NGO) will improve his/her skills in the working environment and help to meet a lot of different people, which will improve communication skills and

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help in their CV.

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, to get a job after college in a well-renowned company the basic requirement after a degree they see is a good communication

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and any experience in any kind of work.

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, teenagers do not get involved in extracurricular activities after school because either they are going to watch TV or play video games,these

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will keep them busy.

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learn the importance of earning money even if they are not getting paid and

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know how hard is to make income and how to spend them wisely.

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, if the pupil goes to

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service he/she will know the essence of hard-earned.

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keep them to stay away from getting any bad habits and into

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trouble.

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, they should not only focus on these

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focus on their studies. In conclusion, it is salient for students to get involved in any type of

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service because it will be going to help in the future in certain ways and going to give them benefits.

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