Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before being allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays,
people
use variety
of transportations Add an article
a variety
such
as automobiles, trains, motorcycles, bicycles
etc..
Some of these are required Replace the punctuation
.
...
Correct article usage
a drivers
drivers
license to use it on Change noun form
driver's
the
public roads, but some others are not. Specialists say Correct article usage
apply
cyclists
should have drivers
exam before they ride Correct article usage
a drivers
bicycles
on the
public roads for Correct article usage
apply
road
safety. In my opinion, I am totally agree
with the specialist’s statement and all Change the verb form
totally agree
cyclists
must take drivers
examination.
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driver's
To begin
with, people
do not know the road
rules so driving
Correct article usage
a driving
test
would help them to understand riding the
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apply
bicycles
properly. For instance
, I have seen many people
rode
Wrong verb form
riding
the
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apply
bicycles
on the Correct your spelling
sidewalk
side walk
. In Japan, Correct your spelling
sidewalk
bicycles
are not allowed to ride on the Correct your spelling
sidewalk
side walk
. The exceptions are for Correct your spelling
sidewalk
people
who are below thirteen or over seventy years old drivers
, and side way
with the sign which allows Correct your spelling
sideway
cyclists
on the side walk
and other reasons that Correct your spelling
sidewalk
cyclists
cannot ride on the road
. However
, people
are still ride
Change the verb form
are still riding
bicycles
on Correct your spelling
sidewalks
side walks
and I Correct your spelling
sidewalks
usually
afraid of the Add a missing verb
am usually
bicycles
passing right next
to me when I am walking. Even the
government announced the rules Correct word choice
though the
people
do not care about that because they do not have chance
to reach that information. Correct article usage
a chance
Therefore
, driving
Correct article usage
a driving
test
would be a good way to spread the rules to the people
who ride the
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apply
bicycles
.
Some ages are not appropriate to ride the
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apply
bicycles
, so driving
Add an article
the driving
test
will be the filter to judge people
who has
Change the verb form
have
appropriate
skills to ride Correct article usage
the appropriate
the
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apply
bicycles
on the public road
or not. I have seen many old people
ride bicycles
on the street even they
don’t control the bicycle properly. Correct word choice
if they
Some times
they ride the Correct your spelling
Sometimes
bicycles
so slow and shaking handles. I have seen these people
almost hitting people
or some objects on the road
. Old people
will lose their control naturally. As there are many car accidents reported on the news caused by old people
, Japanese governments try to be more strict on driving test
for Fix the agreement mistake
tests
elderly
. Correct article usage
the elderly
Thus
, installing driving test
Fix the agreement mistake
tests
to
Change preposition
for
cyclists
will be a good approach to stop
Wrong verb form
stopping
non skilled
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non-skilled
drivers
to ride bicycles
on the
public Correct article usage
apply
road
.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree with experts who wants
to install driving Change the verb form
want
test
for cyclists
because people
will know how to ride the
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apply
bicycles
properly and stop non skilled
Add a hyphen
non-skilled
cyclists
ride bicycles
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