Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before being allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays,
people
use
variety
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of transportations
such
as automobiles, trains, motorcycles,
bicycles
etc
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a drivers
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drivers
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license to use it on
the
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public roads, but some others are not. Specialists say
cyclists
should have
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a drivers
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exam before they ride
bicycles
on
the
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public roads for
road
safety. In my opinion, I
am totally agree
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with the specialist’s statement and all
cyclists
must take
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driver's
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examination.
To begin
with,
people
do not know the
road
rules so
driving
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a driving
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test
would help them to understand riding
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bicycles
properly.
For instance
, I have seen many
people
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the
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bicycles
on the
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sidewalk
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side walk
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sidewalk
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. In Japan,
bicycles
are not allowed to ride on the
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sidewalk
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side walk
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sidewalk
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. The exceptions are for
people
who are below thirteen or over seventy years old
drivers
, and
side way
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sideway
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with the sign which allows
cyclists
on the
side walk
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sidewalk
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and other reasons that
cyclists
cannot ride on the
road
.
However
,
people
are still ride
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bicycles
on
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sidewalks
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side walks
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sidewalks
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and I
usually
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afraid of the
bicycles
passing right
next
to me when I am walking. Even
the
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government announced the rules
people
do not care about that because they do not have
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to reach that information.
Therefore
,
driving
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a driving
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test
would be a good way to spread the rules to the
people
who ride
the
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bicycles
. Some ages are not appropriate to ride
the
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bicycles
, so
driving
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the driving
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test
will be the filter to judge
people
who
has
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appropriate
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skills to ride
the
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bicycles
on the public
road
or not. I have seen many old
people
ride
bicycles
on the street even
they
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if they
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don’t control the bicycle properly.
Some times
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they ride the
bicycles
so slow and shaking handles. I have seen these
people
almost hitting
people
or some objects on the
road
. Old
people
will lose their control naturally. As there are many car accidents reported on the news caused by old
people
, Japanese governments try to be more strict on driving
test
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for
elderly
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the elderly
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.
Thus
, installing driving
test
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tests
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to
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cyclists
will be a good approach to
stop
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stopping
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non skilled
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drivers
to ride
bicycles
on
the
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apply
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public
road
. In conclusion, I absolutely agree with experts who
wants
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to install driving
test
for
cyclists
because
people
will know how to ride
the
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bicycles
properly and stop
non skilled
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non-skilled
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cyclists
ride
bicycles
.
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