The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?
Education plays a crucial part in everyone’s life but nowadays there is a wide variety of sources to get educated. Some people state that education from parents is more important than from school,
this
essay disagrees with this
statement.
On the one hand, teachers
are more professional. Teachers
at schools
are all more professional than parents as they have had proper training, they
know how to educate Correct word choice
and they
students
properly. Education from schools
is more informative, teachers
are more professional so they can teach students
some scientific knowledge
that cannot be learnt from other places, they
can Correct word choice
and they
also
explain the knowledge
to students
more deeply. For instance
, students
can learn the details of human structures from their biology teachers
. This
can allow them to understand better about
the subjects they are studying. If children learn at home, they will not be able to learn Change preposition
apply
much
Correct quantifier usage
many
detailed
as their family may not know about that.
Replace the word
details
On the other hand
, schools
have a better atmosphere to learn. Students
at school can study with other classmates so when others are studying, they are motivated to study together, which can provide them with a better studying vibe. Besides
, they can be able to learn better behaviours. When students
get along with their classmates, they learn to be more polite by seeing other classmates’ behaviours. For example
, they can learn to be friendly by saying thank you when their friends help them. As a result
, schools
have a better vibe in learning both knowledge
and good habits.
To conclude, although
families may understand better of their children and will teach more effectively, schools
can provide more professional knowledge
and a better atmosphere.Submitted by chloelwy3905 on
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