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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Without a doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different
people
. Some
people
 claim that both producers and distributing stages are responsible for reducing
goods
' over packaging, while others think that it is the
responsibility
 of customers to buy
products
 with less amount of packaging to reduce the harmful impact on the environment. In
this
 essay, I will not only shed light on both perceptions but
also
 my view will be elaborated at the end with a logical conclusion. To commence with the
first
 notion, it is undeniable that when purchasers have different options to choose from usually, they tend to choose
goods
 of good quality and reasonable price.
Hence
, it is the
responsibility
 of manufacturers to provide
products
 with less amount of packaging and at the same time with a good price to motivate consumers to purchase them.
For example
,
people
 buy fresh vegetables and fruits
although
, they are not packaged well. That's because these
goods
 are fresh and of an acceptable price.
Therefore
, it is the
responsibility
 of producers and supermarkets to supply
people
 with good quality
products
 and at the same time less packaging to reduce the detrimental effects on the environment.
Nonetheless
, purchasers have to be aware of the dangerous impacts of over-packaging on all aspects of our life. Thereby, they shouldn't consume many plastic bags when purchasing
products
. To take an example,
although
 retail shops in the Uk obligate
people
 to pay for their packages yet, there are still many
people
 who buy extra bags.
Therefore
,
people
 should be sensible when purchasing
goods
 and don't pay for over-packaging. In conclusion, I believe that it is a shared
responsibility
 between manufacturers and consumers to protect the environment from the overuse of packages. Producers should provide consumers with good quality
products
 and fewer amount of packages, while purchasers shouldn't buy bags for over-packaging.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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