You have left college but you didn't say goodbye to your friend who lived in th room with you because he had a course that time. Write a leeter to him. In your letter Apologize and tell him how you spent the day when you left. Tell him how you got home. Invite him to visit you.

Dear Sania, How are doing? I hope

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letter finds you in vibrant health. I'm writing to apologize for not saying goodbye to you before I left for home. I'm feeling really disappointed as we were together for two years; living in the same hostel room and I was not even able to see you that day due to your class. I had the best college time of my life because of your company. After I left, I went to see some of our college mates. in a restaurant where we shared our old memories. Unfortunately, you're not there!

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home. When I reached my hometime, I called my brother to

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me up from the bus stop. I will be glad if you arrange some time for me and come to my house

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Sunday. I can make some awesome plans for spending our day together.

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, we will talk about our future plans. If you need any inquiry about my address, feel free to contact me anytime. Hope to see you soon! Yours lovingly, Anjali

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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