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In the modern world, many employees lack of soft ware skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills?

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In
this
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 contemporary era, soft skills
such
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 as communication and co-operating with a
team
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 are the major problem for most
employees
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.
This
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 essay will discuss the root causes and the effects of the
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 of
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 skills in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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 with, there are many causes of
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 of communication and
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 spirit.
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, most
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 have become introverts. They do not come out to communicate with other
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. They sit in front of the computer or use their mobile to entertain themselves. Whenever they need to talk they chat with their friends.
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, one of my friends lives on my avenue he never comes out to talk or play with me whenever he needs he sends a message on my WhatsApp and in school he is a more reserved student in my class.
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, another reason
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 do not like to interact with other
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 is technology. They interact with their friends, relatives and fellow mates over the internet.
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, a survey conducted by Japan found that in the
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 decade there is a
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 of
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 spirit among
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 and the reason is jealousy among
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. They do their own work without the help of any other
employees
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 and
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 do it to help others
employees
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. Actually, they want to become an apple of an eye of a manager. To conclude, in my opinion,
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 is very common in a field where they
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team
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 spirit and communication skills because they are engaged with technology and
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 envy their partners.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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