In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

Nowadays,
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individuals
with higher education like doctors, engineers and IT
job
holders
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to
countries
like America, Canada, and Australia from under-developed nations to get decent
job
packages. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will explain the difficulties these professionals are facing in their native
countries
and I will
also
shed light on the ways to stop
this
.
To begin
with, people
work
so hard for a long period of time to get a valuable degree but
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they do not
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receive
recieve
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receive
the appropriate
work
package they deserve.
Moreover
, they hardly run their house expenses with low paychecks which
degrade
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their living standard and
also
affect
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them mentally.
In addition
to
this
, the education value is very low in poor
countries
like Bangladesh, Nigeria, India
etcera
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etcetera
therefore
, highly qualified individuals do not get the deserving growth opportunity in their working careers. I think there are some solutions which can help in resolving these issues.
First
of all, there should be a better
job
structure and good
job
packages which will motivate the individuals to
work
for their own
countries
.
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Additionally
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, the living and
work
environment
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to be safe because some people do not want to live in
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nation where thefts, robbery, and
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happened on the regular basis.
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, India has come a long way in improving
it's
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citizen's
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lifestyles and even providing exceptional working benefits. In conclusion, to keep the
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talent
in
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government should implement above mention solutions as soon as possible.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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