You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - describe what you enjoyed about the course - say how much cooking you've done since the course - suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to offer some valuable feedback on the cookery

course

that I did

last

month

from

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your renowned school. I would like to start by

thankig

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thanking

thank

you and your team for tutoring students with so much patience. Because the

course

was so thorough, I never faced any difficulty in comprehending the details. After learning to cook a wide variety of cuisines from

such

a well-known institute , I believe I will have an array of opportunities in the future. Since the completion of my

course

, I have been cooking

everyday

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. I am glad to inform you that I got an internship at a cafe on

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Rogers Street. They were happy to offer me a stipend as well because of the generous feedback I got from one of your master chefs.

Although

the

course

was undoubtedly perfect, it mostly focussed on teaching the preparation of main-

course

meals. It would be great if you could add

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complimentary

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and

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dish making

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course

to the original one. I hope my insights will be valuable. Yours faithfully, Tim Hortons