You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - describe what you enjoyed about the course - say how much cooking you've done since the course - suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to offer some valuable feedback on the cookery
course
that I did
last
month
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your renowned school. I would like to start by
thankig
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thanking
thank
you and your team for tutoring students with so much patience. Because the
course
was so thorough, I never faced any difficulty in comprehending the details. After learning to cook a wide variety of cuisines from
such
a well-known institute , I believe I will have an array of opportunities in the future. Since the completion of my
course
, I have been cooking
everyday
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. I am glad to inform you that I got an internship at a cafe on
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Rogers Street. They were happy to offer me a stipend as well because of the generous feedback I got from one of your master chefs.
Although
the
course
was undoubtedly perfect, it mostly focussed on teaching the preparation of main-
course
meals. It would be great if you could add
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complimentary
starters
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and
sweet
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dish making
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course
to the original one. I hope my insights will be valuable. Yours faithfully, Tim Hortons
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