A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter … tell your friend about the job …what sort of work it involves …say why you think the job would be suitable for him …explain how to apply for the job Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows Dear….,

Dear Rohan, Hello! How are you? I hope you and your family members are fine. I am writing
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information regarding
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. I remember that we met in the mall and you
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told me that you find
job
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a job
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. Yesterday
i
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read
local
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newspaper and found a
job
that suits you . I call
this
local company and get information about
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the job
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. The company has
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position
is
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accountant
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. Your work is data entry for all products and gives
manager
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every day
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reports. I
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you interstate in account
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so
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would decide to
this
job
is suitable for
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. And
also
develop your computer skills . You can apply for
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email through and send your resume
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mail
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or
whatsaap
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WhatsApp
through. Contact no is 8796789565 and I will send
maill
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ID on whatsaap. We will meet
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you soon Warm wishes, Rahul
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