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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, more and more
people
 choose to read online. Some of them guess we do not need paper
books
 anymore and we can read everything on the internet in the future. I disagree with
this
 view for two main reasons in terms of the usage of digital things for some
people
 and personal preferences. Reading online provides many conveniences to us
for example
 we can read our
books
 where we are and when we want.
However
, it still has some bad impact on a certain group of
people
such
 as children and senior students. Children might get myopia in the long-term using too many gadgets in their earlier
time
. They will lose their concentration on other things.
For the
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 elderly, they might not know how to use the e-book reader. They need
time
 to learn how to use it that waste their
time
. The cover of the book can attract our attention. Paper
books
 usually have beautiful graphics and introductions on their cover that make
people
 want to buy them. E-
books
 sometimes only display their title and author. We do not know what the book talks about without reading it and E-
books
 might never be free because the author needs to earn money from their creation. these e-
books
 have the copyright to the author. In
this
 case, we might waste money buying a book which we do not like. In conclusion, most of us still need to read paper
books
 and newspapers rather than get them free online. Because knowledge has its value and we need to pay for it to encourage authors to create more interesting content. Spending too much
time
 with electronic devices is bad for our eyes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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