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television is dangerous because it destroys family life and sense of community, instead of visiting people or talking with our family, we just watch TELEVISION. WHAT is YOUR OPINION?

#television #life #sense #community #people
the bar chart illustrates the
amount
 of 4
types’
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types
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digital
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of digital
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games
 sold by
billion
dollars
 from 2000 to 2006. It is obvious that handheld
games
 are the most popular
games
between
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over
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6-year
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a 6-year
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 period, and online
games
 saw sharp increasing
sales
 over
this
 period. In 2000, console
games
 sold around 6
billion
dollars
 which
was
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 almost half of the
amount
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 of handheld
games
 in the same year. Over the following years, handheld
games
sales
 figures rose by approximately 7
billion
dollars
, while console
games
 saw
sales
fell
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 to
the
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approximately half
amount
 which was about 2.8
billion
dollars
. online
games
 selling rose dramatically by about 8
billion
dollars
 from 2001 to 2006,
also
 the mobile phone
games
 selling saw
sales
 rise by the number around 5
billion
dollars
 from 2002 to 2006.
However
 mobile phone
games
 and online
games
 increased enormously over
this
6-years
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6-year
 period, handheld
games
 still were by far the most important type of digital
games
 selling and provided the biggest
amount
 of selling
in
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each year.
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