1. The shortage in housing has severe social consequences in big cities. Only governments can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days people prefer to live in big
cities
because income sources are good in
countryside
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the countryside
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so the shortage of houses
are
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big problem seen in
cities
. I disagree with
this
statement government can solve
this
problem there are so many reasons which I elaborate my views in
further
paragraphs . To start with,there are so many reasons why city houses Shortages .
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,in
cities
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more facilities are available like hospitals , schools ,industries ,
shopping
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and shopping
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centers
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so that's why people prefer to live in
cities
rather than villages .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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