You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear,

Mr.

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John I just move into

this

town

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last

month. I don't know

this

place so much. Let's

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introduce myself. I am a student of Kasetsart University. You can

called

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me Rose. I will become your neighbour.

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Saturday. I have a plan to celebrate my birthday. The party will start

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5.00 p.m. to 11.00 p.m.

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my house. Do you mind if It may make some noise

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your home

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If you don't mind I would like to invite you to come to my house

for

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celebrate

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my 24th birthday. There is a lot of

foods

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and

also

drinks. The party will

set

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up near the pool. don't

forgot

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to bring the swimming dress to the party. You will never

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this

time. It will be

excellent

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time. I hope to see you

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Saturday. I am waiting for your response. Best Regards. Rose

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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