You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear,
Mr.
John
I just move into Change the punctuation
Mr
this
town in
Change preposition
apply
last
month. I don't know this
place so much. Let's me
introduce myself. I am a student of Kasetsart University. You can Correct pronoun usage
apply
called
me Rose. I will become your neighbour.
Change the verb form
call
be called
In
Change preposition
Next
next
Saturday. I have a plan to celebrate my birthday. The party will start in
5.00 p.m. to 11.00 p.m. Change the preposition
at
in
my house. Do you mind if It may make some noise Change preposition
at
to
your homeChange preposition
in
.
If you don't mind I would like to invite you to come to my house Change the punctuation
?
for
Change preposition
to
celebrate
my 24th birthday. There is a lot of Change the verb form
celebrating
foods
and Fix the agreement mistake
food
also
drinks. The party will set
up near the pool. don't Add a missing verb
be set
forgot
to bring the swimming dress to the party. You will never Change the verb form
forget
forgot
Change the verb form
forget
this
time. It will be excellent
time. I hope to see you Add an article
an excellent
in
Change preposition
apply
next
Saturday.
I am waiting for your response.
Best Regards.
RoseSubmitted by r.pattaa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite