You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear,
Mr.
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John I just move into
this
town
in
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last
month. I don't know
this
place so much. Let's
me
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introduce myself. I am a student of Kasetsart University. You can
called
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me Rose. I will become your neighbour.
In
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next
Saturday. I have a plan to celebrate my birthday. The party will start
in
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5.00 p.m. to 11.00 p.m.
in
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my house. Do you mind if It may make some noise
to
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your home
.
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If you don't mind I would like to invite you to come to my house
for
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celebrate
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my 24th birthday. There is a lot of
foods
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and
also
drinks. The party will
set
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up near the pool. don't
forgot
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to bring the swimming dress to the party. You will never
forgot
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this
time. It will be
excellent
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time. I hope to see you
in
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next
Saturday. I am waiting for your response. Best Regards. Rose
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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