Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages over disadvantages?
In
this
contemporary world, many individuals are engaging with their Linking Words
work
all day which leads to insufficient time for enjoyment. Use synonyms
Although
there is merit to long working hours, I think the drawbacks outweigh the benefit.
To start with, the main disadvantage is that much of the employee’s precious time that should be enjoyed with his family would be gone. Linking Words
This
is because employees usually prioritize their Linking Words
work
and it will take Use synonyms
years
before they recognise the mistake and start to take action against it. Use synonyms
For example
, people should spare some time to take a vacation and have a trip with their families. Linking Words
Thus
, people would grow old without enough memories with their families.
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Moreover
, working long hours for many Linking Words
years
may cause fatigue and one day Use synonyms
this
person would reach his limit and quit his job because each person has a certain limit to tolerate the heavy duties at Linking Words
work
and cannot Use synonyms
work
any Use synonyms
further
. To illustrate, I have a friend of mine who was working in Dubai in a well-known company for Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
Although
she was holding a high position at that company, she quit after 4 Linking Words
years
of continuous Use synonyms
work
and returned back to her home country. Use synonyms
Hence
, an unemployed person who lost a job Linking Words
he
hardly worked for Correct pronoun usage
apply
years
.
To conclude, nowadays people spend most of their daily life at their workplace leaving nothing for leisure. Use synonyms
This
might have an advantage but I believe the disadvantages are more serious and its effect may be irreversible in the foreseen future.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...